This storyline is honestly more valid than a great many I've seen before. Both on the internet and some particularly bad novels I read.
The Herald-Mage trilogy. Awesome setting, interesting story, but more than half of the entire trilogy is spent concentrating on how incredibly gay the protagonist is. He's seduced by barely legal boy half his age in the third. He dies holding off an army and there's afterword of the boy as an old man dying in a mystical forest haunted by his lover...
That being said, I believe this is a very valid story you have come up with, and I have seen much worse.
sadly, the cops in my town are like that... except for some reason the only thing they can do is give over charged parking tickets. imagine this:
you're in your car and you park in front of a meter. you walk over to some place to see if it's open (this occupies 10 seconds of your time) the officer walks up to your car and puts a parking ticket on it for not paying 5 minutes on the meter when you were only gone for 10 seconds. a similar thing actually happened to me once. the cops in my town are assholes.
I don't know if anyone has told you(since everyone is busy saying "LOL" or "HAV MI BABIEZ"), but you're quite good at setting up drama and doing interesting angles in panels which makes the jokes that much funnier. You're a very skilled animator and comic artist. :thumbs up: